Jules the jester

Fuzz head. That was part three. LOL. Down lol. click in my sig for part one. LOL

Listen to Meevs She is brilliant when it comes to Developing your characters. I took her advice on writing a part just about my character and it Developed him by ...

Beak swerved again. It was obvious that these new animals, what ever they were, were deadly. A few of the elder students had taken to the air, determined not to ...

I much rather having a harsh in depth crit where the critter tells you everything you did wrong. It has actually helped me improve my writing so much in the ...

Yeah, woop. I had been looking forward to this for a while and it did not dissapoint. Well done. I have become hooked. The way you switch from how she ...

Teacher: Where is your homework young man? Student: Oh my god sir look at that. *teachers turns and looks at window* Student: you see that bus sir? Teacher: yes, what ...

Can you PM me when you post more. It is so good. Eragon admitting he is crazy, lol.

Aye he is evil aint he Alainna. I hope your pubnlishing goes well. I think this would be quite successful as a novel.

Ok. what are those sketchy beast things called. I have taken to just callling then Beasts

Still searching for a Title. I think i have Title block. Anyway as usual all crits very welcome. ************************************** The alarm clock beeped telling all within the vicinity to get ...

Peter woke up in his tent in the morning Instead of this perhaps say. Groaning Peter awoke. the tent was cold and his blankets hadnt doen a good job at ...

Jon looked at the beast. The first thing that came to his mind was "That is cool." but then his sense took over and told him to run. Grabbing Aqua's ...

Yay. As always i enjoyed it. I forgot to ask how th epublishing went. Did they accept?

Dont be scared. I used to think that but everyone is very helpful. and of course they wont laugh as every writer knows the horror of having your writing laughed ...

Boy. *Hands you a big Balloon with BOY on it*